commit 0e591a6d5f48c69a89d3a6d3df8328875a6b4d0a
author ivinnykov <ivinnykov> Wed Aug 08 10:47:48 2012 +0000
committer ivinnykov <ivinnykov> Wed Aug 08 10:47:48 2012 +0000
tree e303118133214f8c2274bc1df0db979af76a82ca
parent b19546a3846a21450ca31be1ca90c034e901b051

Grammar fixes

documentation/gettingStarted/subversion/svn_intro.php

diff --git a/documentation/gettingStarted/subversion/svn_intro.php b/documentation/gettingStarted/subversion/svn_intro.php
index e02c786..8bbc47f 100644
--- a/documentation/gettingStarted/subversion/svn_intro.php
+++ b/documentation/gettingStarted/subversion/svn_intro.php
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@
 
 <h2>Subversion introduction</h2>
 <p>
-	Subversion&reg; is an open-source version control system. Subversion&reg; allows developers to share there projects on
-	the repositories, where they are stored afterwards. Repository is much similar to a file server, except the fact, that
-	it not only stores the copy of the file system, but its previous states and changing history. Subversion&reg; access its
-	repositories using network, so it provides a probability for a person to work over some shared files and watch for every
-	possible changes made by other developers.</p>
+	Subversion&reg; is an open-source version control system. Subversion&reg; allows developers to share their projects on 
+	repositories, where they are stored afterwards. A repository is very similar to a file server. The only difference 
+	is that it not only stores a copy of the file system, but also its previous states and changing history. Subversion&reg; 
+	can be accessed over a network, so it provides the possibility for people to work on shared files and watch for 
+	changes made by other developers.</p>
 	<p>Subversion&reg; home: <a target="_blank" href="http://subversion.tigris.org/">http://subversion.tigris.org/</a></p>
 	<img src="../../images/inside.png"/>
 	<br/>