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         <h1>Desktop IDEs</h1>
 			 	<p>Eclipse is famous for our Java Integrated Development Environment (IDE), but
-			 	our C/C++ IDE, and PHP IDE are pretty cool too. You can easily combine language
+			 	our C/C++ IDE and PHP IDE are pretty cool too. You can easily combine language
 			 	support and other features into any of our default packages, and the Eclipse
 			 	Marketplace allows for virtually unlimited customization and extension.</p>
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 		  	  <h1>Web IDEs</h1>
-			 	  <p>Develop your software where ever you go. It'll be there, in the cloud, right where you left it.
-			 	  Just login from a web browser on desktop, laptop, tablet, at an airport,
-			 	  on a bus or even in your office. All you need is a modern web browser and you're ready to get started.</p>
+			 	  <p>Develop your software wherever you go. It'll be there, in the cloud, right where you left it.
+			 	  Just log in from a web browser on a desktop, laptop, or tablet — at an airport, on a bus, or even in your office. All you need is a modern web browser and you're ready to get started.</p>
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 			 	    <li><a href="/orion/"><img src="images/orion-logo78x48.jpg" alt="Open Source Platform For Cloud Based Development"/></a></li>
 		      </ul>
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 	          <h4 class="media-heading">Tools</h4>
 	          <p class="emphasis">Extend the extensible platform.</p>
-          	<p>An impressive collection of tools can be easily installed into your Eclipse desktop IDE, including GUI builders, modeling, charting and reporting, testing, and more.</p>
+          	<p>An impressive collection of tools can be easily installed into your Eclipse desktop IDE, including GUI builders and tools for modeling, charting and reporting, testing, and more.</p>
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 	          <h4 class="media-heading">Marketplace</h4>
 	          <p class="emphasis">Customize and extend Eclipse and make it your own.</p>
-          	<p>Use the <a href="/mpc">Eclipse Marketplace Client</a> to find, install, and vote for new plug-ins from our vast eco-system of providers.</p>
+          	<p>Use the <a href="/mpc">Eclipse Marketplace Client</a> to find, install, and vote for new plug-ins from our vast ecosystem of providers.</p>
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