Updated new contributor advice
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     <ol>
       <li> <b>Check out Photran's source code from CVS and run the test suite.</b>
-           Instructions are
-           <a target="_blank" href="http://dev.eclipse.org/viewcvs/index.cgi/%7Echeckout%7E/org.eclipse.ptp/photran/org.eclipse.photran-dev-docs/dev-guide/cvs-instructions.pdf?cvsroot=Tools_Project">here</a>
-      <li> <b>Join the <a target="_blank" href="https://dev.eclipse.org/mailman/listinfo/photran-dev">photran-dev</a> mailing list.</b>
+           We have written detailed
+           <a target="_blank" href="http://dev.eclipse.org/viewcvs/index.cgi/%7Echeckout%7E/org.eclipse.ptp/photran/org.eclipse.photran-dev-docs/dev-guide/cvs-instructions.pdf?cvsroot=Tools_Project">instructions</a>
+           on how to do this.
+      <li> <b>Join the <a target="_blank" href="https://dev.eclipse.org/mailman/listinfo/photran-dev">photran-dev mailing list</a>.</b>
            This is where discussions about Photran's development take place.
            Questions from developers (like you), release planning, API changes,
            etc. all get discussed here.
-      <li> <b>Join the <a target="_blank" href="https://dev.eclipse.org/mailman/listinfo/photran">photran</a> users' mailing list.</b>
+      <li> <b>Join the <a target="_blank" href="https://dev.eclipse.org/mailman/listinfo/photran">photran users' mailing list</a>.</b>
            It is good to keep track of what Photran's users are discussing, and
            as a Photran developer you will probably be able to answer many of
            their questions as well.
       <li> <b>Create a Bugzilla account.</b>
-           You will need to have an account at bugs.eclipse.org.  If you do not,
-           you can create one
-           <a target="_blank" href="https://bugs.eclipse.org/bugs/createaccount.cgi">here</a>.
-           When you want to contribute code to Photran, it must come through
-           Bugzilla.
+           You will need to
+           <a target="_blank" href="https://bugs.eclipse.org/bugs/createaccount.cgi">create an account at bugs.eclipse.org</a>
+           if you don't already have one.  When you eventually want to contribute
+           code to Photran, you will need to do it by attaching a patch to a
+           Bugzilla bug.
       <li> <b>Read the <a target="_blank" href="http://dev.eclipse.org/viewcvs/index.cgi/%7Echeckout%7E/org.eclipse.ptp/photran/org.eclipse.photran-dev-docs/dev-guide/dev-guide.pdf?cvsroot=Tools_Project">Photran
            Developer's Guide</a>.</b>  Chapters 1, 2, and 3 apply to everyone.
            The other chapters are more specialized; for example, the chapters
@@ -959,10 +960,9 @@
            when you have something more specific you need to do.
     </ol>
 
-      Photran's web site is
-      <a target="_blank" href="http://www.eclipse.org/photran">http://www.eclipse.org/photran</a>,
-      and all of the above resources are listed on the &quot;Contributor
-      Info&quot; page.
+    <p>Photran's web site is
+    <a target="_blank" href="http://www.eclipse.org/photran">http://www.eclipse.org/photran</a>.
+    All of the above resources are listed on the &quot;Contributor Info&quot; page.
 
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