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This project aims at designing and implementing a new architecture and infrastructure for integrating development tools across desktop, browser, and servers. The goal is to provide an extremely flexible platform and infrastructure that allows new cloud-based tooling components to be built highly decoupled from each other and that bridges the gap to existing desktop IDEs at the same time.
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<li><a href="/orion">Orion</a><br />
-Orion's objective is to create a browser-based open tool integration platform which is entirely focused on developing for the web, in the web. Tools are written in JavaScript and run in the browser. Unlike other attempts at creating browser-based development tools, this is not an IDE running in a single tab. Links work and can be shared. You can open a file in a new tab. Great care has been taken to provide a web experience for development.
+Orion's objective is to create a browser-based open tool integration platform which is entirely focused on developing for the web, in the web. Tools are written in JavaScript and run in the browser. Unlike other attempts at creating browser-based development tools, this is not an IDE running in a single tab. Links work and can be shared. You can open a file in a new tab. Great care has been taken to provide a web experience for development.
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<h3>What is being announced?</h3>
-Eclipse is announcing the formation of a new Top Level Project, Eclipse Cloud Development to create the technologies, platforms, and tools necessary to enable the delivery of highly integrated cloud development and cloud developer environments. The ECD charter is available here.
+Eclipse is announcing the formation of a new Top Level Project, "Eclipse Cloud Development" to create the technologies, platforms, and tools necessary to enable the delivery of highly integrated cloud development and cloud developer environments. The ECD charter is available here.
This TLP initially combines Eclipse Orion, Eclipse Che, and Eclipse Flux with SAP signaling that Dirigible will become part of the initiative. The Eclipse board of directors voted to approve this new project on September 17th, 2014, and a new project management committee has been formed.
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<h3>Why is Eclipse creating a top level project dedicated to cloud development?</h3>
There are over 22 million professional developers, and more than 99% of all development is still done on the desktop. The cloud has proven benefits to eliminate configuration overhead and improve visibility and control for organizations. The transition to cloud development away from the desktop has begun.
-Over the past 5 years, there have been 100s of global initiatives to work on development tools or underlying infrastructure necessary to enable development entirely in the cloud. With three projects at Eclipse already working on cloud development, and more coming soon, the time has come to focus the industrys efforts on enabling this transition.
+Over the past 5 years, there have been 100s of global initiatives to work on development tools or underlying infrastructure necessary to enable development entirely in the cloud. With three projects at Eclipse already working on cloud development, and more coming soon, the time has come to focus the industry's efforts on enabling this transition.
By creating a Top Level Project, the combined projects are better able to concentrate their resources, more easily align on technological and market objectives, and create a streamlined path for onboarding additional ecosystem projects, developers, and committers to cloud development.
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<h3>How will Orion, Che, Flux, and Dirigible collaborate together?</h3>
We have identified a number of initiatives that the projects will align on. These include:
-Finding ways to have Che and Orion plug-ins work within each others systems.
+Finding ways to have Che and Orion plug-ins work within each other's systems.
Standardizing on the synchronous REST API model that allows browser clients to communicate with server-side systems. A sample set of APIs can be seen at docs.codenvy.com.
Using Flux to standardize on the asynchronous communication model between various cloud systems, along with enabling browser and desktop clients to have decoupled access to cloud systems.
Collaborating on a model that allows for on-demand, authentication-less environment creation through URLs, similar to the effects seen by Codenvy Factory, as documented at docs.codenvy.com/user. Temporary environments will be possible to be generated on any system supporting the format.
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Incorporate the Dirigible configurate-stored-as-a-model approach to create an abstraction to support a variety of rapid development approaches and frameworks.
<h3>What is the future of cloud development, and your roadmap here?</h3>
-Cloud developments benefits are significant to individual developers, development teams, and enterprise organizations. There are huge configuration taxes that exist today due to environment creation, environmental technical debt, environmental tribal knowledge, hardware interoperability issues, and the general interoperability issues that exist between making an ecosystem of tools and plug-ins work together. All of these problems can be dramatically reduced with a cloud development platform that automates the full lifecycle of developer environment and its supported tooling.
+Cloud development's benefits are significant to individual developers, development teams, and enterprise organizations. There are huge configuration taxes that exist today due to environment creation, environmental technical debt, environmental tribal knowledge, hardware interoperability issues, and the general interoperability issues that exist between making an ecosystem of tools and plug-ins work together. All of these problems can be dramatically reduced with a cloud development platform that automates the full lifecycle of developer environment and its supported tooling.<br/>
-To achieve this vision, much more than a cloud IDE is required. A cloud development platform (CDP) takes a cloud IDE and turns it into an orchestration system for developer environments. The power of the CDP is that it can automate many of the workflows that make up the tasks carried out by developers, QA, product managers, documentation specialists, and devops professionals. Why should each developer only have a single developer environment that lives indefinitely (statically) on their desktop, when - with full automation - every developer and system can have a unique developer environment for each task they carry out during the day? Whether its fixing a bug, investigating a legacy branch, working on a new feature, or exploring a new technology library, a cloud development platform can auto-provision a specialized environment for each task, on-demand, with no downloads or configuration required by the developer.
+To achieve this vision, much more than a cloud IDE is required. A cloud development platform (CDP) takes a cloud IDE and turns it into an orchestration system for developer environments. The power of the CDP is that it can automate many of the workflows that make up the tasks carried out by developers, QA, product managers, documentation specialists, and devops professionals. Why should each developer only have a single developer environment that lives indefinitely (statically) on their desktop, when - with full automation - every developer and system can have a unique developer environment for each task they carry out during the day? Whether it's fixing a bug, investigating a legacy branch, working on a new feature, or exploring a new technology library, a cloud development platform can auto-provision a specialized environment for each task, on-demand, with no downloads or configuration required by the developer.<br />
-The CDP can then provide numerous services to make the developers workflow shorter and less error prone. These include advanced editors, dependency analysis, automated unit testing, debugging, building, packaging, and source code management integration. The CDP can take these operations at scale, and make them run faster than they would normally run on an individual desktop, but also require less hardware for a large organization than performing these functions on desktops since the cloud can be operated on a dense hardware cluster.
+The CDP can then provide numerous services to make the developer's workflow shorter and less error prone. These include advanced editors, dependency analysis, automated unit testing, debugging, building, packaging, and source code management integration. ECD can take these operations at scale, and make them run faster than they would normally run on an individual desktop, but also require less hardware for a large organization than performing these functions on desktops since the cloud can be operated on a dense hardware cluster.<br />
-Finally, with development centralized, devops and development leaders, can better support the development of a population of developers by incorporating best practices, behavioral access controls, and monitoring tools to ensure IP compliance and maximum productivity of individuals. Imagine being able to direct an extra 20GB of RAM to a developer that urgently needs it for compilation, or creating a special set of sand boxes to support white room development of secure IP, or allowing an instructor to create a programming exam accessible to his students for exactly one hour with controls to detect any plagiarism or cheating. With a CDP, all of these scenarios are configurable, simply.
+Finally, with development centralized, devops and development leaders, can better support the development of a population of developers by incorporating best practices, behavioral access controls, and monitoring tools to ensure IP compliance and maximum productivity of individuals. Imagine being able to direct an extra 20GB of RAM to a developer that urgently needs it for compilation, or creating a special set of sand boxes to support white room development of secure IP, or allowing an instructor to create a programming exam accessible to his students for exactly one hour with controls to detect any plagiarism or cheating. With a CDP, all of these scenarios are configurable, simply.<br />
Net, net: Faster development. Cheaper development. Development done with compliance and security.
Our roadmap to support this vision includes:
-Advancing each TLP project through their normal roadmap and evolution processes.
-Recruiting new projects that provide critical developer services in the cloud into the ECD TLP.
-Aligning core plug-in, editor, and API / interface models between the projects.
-There will be combined ecosystem, evangelism, and business development efforts to bring more developers, projects, and plug-ins to ECD model including special efforts and attention to migrating existing Eclipse plug-ins.
-Codenvy will create an additional project that focuses on the enterprise scale elements of a ECD, and Flux / Orion / Che will work to standardize deployment of each system within the enterprise infrastructure.
-An effort to study how analytics, events, and the BI of development workflows will be created.
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+<li>Advancing each TLP project through their normal roadmap and evolution processes.</li>
+<li>Recruiting new projects that provide critical developer services in the cloud into the ECD TLP.</li>
+<li>Aligning core plug-in, editor, and API / interface models between the projects.</li>
+<li>There will be combined ecosystem, evangelism, and business development efforts to bring more developers, projects, and plug-ins to ECD model including special efforts and attention to migrating existing Eclipse plug-ins.</li>
+<li>Codenvy will create an additional project that focuses on the enterprise scale elements of a ECD, and Flux / Orion / Che will work to standardize deployment of each system within the enterprise infrastructure.
+<li>An effort to study how analytics, events, and the BI of development workflows will be created.</li>
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<h3>Why is Codenvy donating their core IP?</h3>
Codenvy believes in openness, transparency, ecosystem, and Eclipse. The cloud development problem is massive and cannot be solved individually. By working with the Eclipse foundation, Codenvy is able to concentrate their resources with others that have a similar value system and vision.
-<h3>When will the Che code be available? For which parts of the platform?</h3>
+<h3>When will the Che code be available? For which parts of the platform?</h3>
The initial Che code is available under EPL at github.com/codenvy/sdk. We are working within the Eclipse process to get through Incubation now.
<h3>What kinds of products, applications can we expect to see as a result of this collaboration?</h3>
