FIX 4.PHP
Signed-off-by: Christopher Guindon <chris.guindon@eclipse-foundation.org>
diff --git a/eclipse_newsletter/2020/march/content/en_2.php b/eclipse_newsletter/2020/march/content/en_2.php
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<img src="images/2_1.png"/>
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-<p dir="ltr">The self-contained runtime environment runs in the browser so there are no additional
+<p dir="ltr">The self-contained runtime environment runs in the cloud so there are no additional
downloads or installations. Integrated combinations of pre-selected engines ensure the two aspects
- of Dirigible work together. You can execute your application code in the runtime, or you can use
+ of Dirigible work together. You can execute your application code in the runtime through the web IDE, or you can use
the runtime on its own for production purposes.</p>
<p dir="ltr">This integrated approach to application development and production is a significant
advantage if you’re used to working with standalone IDEs, whether they’re local or
@@ -70,14 +70,14 @@
very dynamic. Business processes change constantly, and applications need to keep pace.</p>
<p dir="ltr">To ensure developers can quickly adapt applications to align with changing business
processes, Dirigible enables easy application extensibility and fast database access. The
- low-code, no-code approach we’ve taken also accelerates business application development.</p>
+ low-code/no-code approach we’ve taken also accelerates business application development.</p>
<p dir="ltr">In addition, Dirigible supports a full-stack development process so you can create
everything you need within the Dirigible development environment.</p>
<h2 dir="ltr">A Stable API Simplifies Development</h2>
<p dir="ltr">A stable API is essential when you’re frequently evolving business applications.
While there are numerous well-known stable APIs in very established technologies, such as Java,
that’s not the case in the cloud right now.</p>
-<p dir="ltr">To simplify development, Dirigible provides what we call enterprise JavaScript, which
+<p dir="ltr">To simplify development, Dirigible provides what we call Enterprise JavaScript, which
is a subset of stable Java APIs we’ve created to lower the barrier of entry to cloud
development. Here’s a brief example of a request/response API.</p>
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@@ -96,13 +96,13 @@
models can also be used together.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Afterwards, you can write custom extensions that enhance the overall applications. You
can also embed custom views and third-party frameworks, such as Google Maps, for really
- interesting applications.</p>
+ complex applications.</p>
<h2 dir="ltr">Customization Capabilities Increase Flexibility</h2>
<p dir="ltr">Models are a great way to very quickly and easily develop 80 percent of a business
application. But, the other 20 percent of the application is also very important. Many developers
won’t use a development environment unless it provides the ability to tailor that final 20
percent of the application.</p>
-<p dir="ltr">While many low-code, no-code development platforms limit the way you can customize the
+<p dir="ltr">While many low-code/no-code development platforms limit the way you can customize the
application, we’ve taken the opposite approach. With Eclipse Dirigible, you have complete
flexibility to add new templates and generators, and to write and include your own custom code.</p>
<h2 dir="ltr">Integration With Eclipse Che Brings Devops to a Kubernetes Environment</h2>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
<p dir="ltr">Interestingly, we completed the integration over just two or three days while we were
all together during EclipseCon Europe in Ludwigsburg last October! It was an incredible
collaborative experience and a great opportunity to work together face-to-face with the broader
- Eclipse cloud development community.</p>
+ Eclipse Cloud Development (ECD) community.</p>
<p dir="ltr">Here’s a look at Eclipse Dirigible’s predefined application templates in
the integrated user interface.</p>
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<h2 dir="ltr">We’re Looking for Partners, Customers, and Developers</h2>
<p dir="ltr">Because Eclipse Dirigible is a mature project, we’re actively seeking university
- and business partners as well as customers so we can collaborate with them and demonstrate
+ and business partners, as well as customers, so we can collaborate with them and demonstrate
what’s possible with Eclipse Dirigible. Of course, we also welcome all developers who are
interested in joining the project.</p>
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