Linux notes are partially out of date and in need of grammar corrections (bug 503330)
https://bugs.eclipse.org/bugs/show_bug.cgi?id=503330
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<h3>Note for Linux users</h3>
<p>The SVN Connectors' plug-in doesn't contain binaries of JavaHL library for Linux OS.
- So if you want to use JavaHL connector to access the repository, you should build the
- library by yourself or use already built for Linux OS one.</p>
- <p>Also you should pay special attention, that JVM uses the value of LD_LIBRARY_PATH to look for used libraries,
- so the JavaHL library must be there also. But if you want to have it in another place you should let the JVM know about this.</br>
- The easiest way is to add a following line to eclipse.ini as any line after -vmargs: "-Djava.library.path=<i>input
- here the path to the library</i>".</br>
- Also you can use any other appropriable to do this.</p>
+ So if you want to use the JavaHL connector to access SVN, you should build the
+ library by yourself or install the pre-built one from the software repository.</p>
+ <p>Also you should pay special attention to the fact, that JVM uses the value of LD_LIBRARY_PATH environment variable to look for the libraries to load.
+ So the path to the JavaHL binaries must be included here as well, otherwise you'll have to edit your <i>eclipse.ini</i> file to let the JVM know of the actual place.</br>
+ In order to do so you just need to add the following line to eclipse.ini after the "-vmargs" line: "-Djava.library.path=<i>input here the path to the library</i>".</br></p>
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